Just felt like to share some of my work in a roleplay mode server i played long ago.
Hope you enjoy it ! if not then don't be so mean with me thanks xD
Posted 26 October 2014 - 11:49 AM
awww bright light!!!!!!!!!! where is my sun glasssssssssss
just a suggestion : can you make story telling like film roll on motion.... ?
Ps : I do love listening to good stories :P
Posted 26 October 2014 - 02:00 PM
Sure i can give it a try hehe this was just a small display of the whole story it's a big project i made took 2 years to complete it.
Posted 26 October 2014 - 02:13 PM
It's fucking bad. Mix of DBZ where one clash lasts for few episodes with story deepth of Power Rangers and action of brazilian drama. And all 3 are much better than this thing. Especially DBZ.
1. Shallow story. Completly no background except generic "for my people and homeland!". Did the RG steal ice cream from your people and took a shit in town square fountain?
2. Boring as fuck. Journey is just screenshots of empty maps, even dialogues to justify it are non-existent. Fight is spamming the same shit, SSs just show random animation frames.
3. Dialogues are bad. "Exception"? At least you could add something heroic like "but I must finish this/someone has to defeat the evil" or some other shit.
4. *Miraculous Blade nods agreeing with Psor*
Either git gud at making stories or stop. And give me back 2 minutes of my life. And new scrollwheel for my mouse for wasting it for scrolling through this shit.
These gifs have more action than your story:
Edited by Psor, 26 October 2014 - 02:20 PM.
Posted 26 October 2014 - 02:45 PM
Well every opinion is respected thanks for your comments even if its not a like on it xD
Edit : That gif of the High Priest lol..
Edited by Ken, 26 October 2014 - 02:46 PM.
Posted 26 October 2014 - 07:56 PM
At least you don't flip out at negative comments like some people. That's a good trait you have there.
Posted 26 October 2014 - 08:39 PM
At least you don't flip out at negative comments like some people. That's a good trait you have there.